Sean encouraged me to go to the advisor's office for some help about writing, then after seeing the  excessive mistakes, I just realized  my defective writing skill is far away from the request.

Also, David offeredme a good idea that writing journal probably is an efficient way to make progress on my writing, and I followed him--start my journal.

I wish I could pass it.

It is a kind of awkard since it is not appropriate to put my awful writing in my space, though I really need your help , finding out my defects and weaknesses.

Please feel free to point them out!